She crawls backwards, down his body, skin sliding on skin as she slips against him, he is restrained, open, vulnerable beneath her. His chest rises and falls quickly, deeply, almost hyperventilating as he waits, cock hard in fear and anticipation of what comes next.
She looks up at him, an amused expression on her face, her mouth close to the head of his cock, she does not touch it, breathes against him, watches it pulse as if it is a living creature, as if it would reach for her. He does not move.
The corner of her mouth curls upwards as she parts her lips, snakes her tongue out between them, touches the tip wetly to him. He is sensitive now, she hears a sound, a sucking of breath, or sharp exhalation, she isn’t sure.
A quick dip of her head and she takes him into the warm soft surrounds of her mouth, fast, sudden, she slides her lips down his cock abruptly, strongly, her tongue lubricating the way, then back up just as rapidly, one stroke, she almost hears the ‘pop’ as her lips release his cock back into the air. A desperate groan from somewhere above her, quick breaths, she sees a twitch in his thigh muscles as he forces himself to keep still. He does not move.
She licks her lips, moves into a comfortable position. She stares at his face for a moment, he is beautiful, mouth open, eyes focussed on her, he sinks into her gaze, expectant and lost, she wants to kiss him again and always, to swallow that look that he gives her. He parts his lips a little further, his tongue peeks out to touch them, oh god… he is teasing her. She swears inwardly, her stomach lurching with that aching need, he pretends to be oblivious, she loves that. And still, he does not move.
She leans down, laps once at the tip of his cock, a long leisurely stroke around and over it, he hisses, his whole body tensing. She flushes at his reaction, heat rising, she takes the head of his cock into her mouth and closes her teeth on it, no lips, just… her teeth… gripping his cock in her mouth, firmly… with her teeth. She smiles to herself, and then, she waits.
It takes him a moment to realise that there is nothing happening, that she is not moving, that the pressure of her teeth on his flesh is not abating, that she is just… waiting. The moment seems to stretch out, she feels saliva gathering in her mouth, and lets it drip out onto his cock, she wonders vaguely if he can feel it… would feel nice, she thinks. She knows he is puzzling over what to do, a million thoughts whizzing through his mind… tickticktick at the speed of light, she gives him no help, she just… waits. And then, he moves.
He tenses his arse beneath her and tentatively raises his hips, pushing his cock up into her mouth, slowly, her teeth scraping against the sensitive skin of the underside and top. Perhaps he thinks she will relent, she doesn’t, of course… He makes a whimpering noise as he pushes his cock into her mouth against her teeth, she hears the slight sound of it through her jaw, the rasping. He groans as he continues the push and then withdraws, slowly, an edge of desperation in it. And again, he presses his hard cock into her mouth, her teeth bared, scouring his sensitive flesh, the pressure consistent and painful, he carries on.
This blow job with her teeth continues, agonisingly slowly, he makes a keening sound, like a wounded animal as her teeth abrade his skin over and over. She stays still, just varies the pressure a little, clamping down tighter when he seems too comfortable, easing her bite when she thinks he can take no more. She drools all over his cock, unable to swallow properly, and still, she feels his skin catch and skitter across her sharp teeth, the wetness doesn’t ease the scouring. And when she thinks he is close to giving up, she slides her lips soft against the length of him, respite, deep and long, her tongue slipping against the aching skin, and then, back to teeth.
He scrapes himself raw on her, relentlessly hurting himself, hard and desperate, whimpering and gasping for breath as he drives himself in slow motion against the pain.
48 comments
So hot!
robert
That is so fun isn't it?
Coug
Oh Christ!
I mean… that's just nasty. And hot.
Really. What a complete bitch! What a complete and utter horrible bitch! And the worst thing of all is that it's incredibly hot and personally I know I'd desperately want more and more and more even though I'm being literally tortured and utterly manipulated.
So… yeah. What a filthy, magnificent bitch you are!
I must admit I find it very frustrating to read so I definitely won't be reading through it again and again and again. Definitely.
Well, I guess I can add one more thing to the things I never want to experience…
Good lawd – you just set fire to my computer monitor! I'm going to be carrying that image around in my feverish brain for several days to come.
I'm ordinarily not fond of blow jobs, but that sounds exquisite, Ma'am!
Good God woman. I really love erotica from the Domme's point of view…and the pickings are slim. But you, you are amazing!
robert: “So hot!”
*smile* Thanks, robert.
Ferns
Coug: “That is so fun isn't it?”
*wild nodding* Oh hell yes!
Ferns
Anonymous: “What a complete bitch! What a complete and utter horrible bitch!”
*laugh* This is still making me laugh, hours later…
“And the worst thing of all is that it's incredibly hot…”
Funny… I could have sworn that was the *best* thing!
“I must admit I find it very frustrating to read so I definitely won't be reading through it again and again and again. Definitely.”
No no, of course not… what a terrible waste of time that would be!
Ferns
Brids: “Well, I guess I can add one more thing to the things I never want to experience…”
How long *is* that list now, Brids?
Ferns
Anonymous: “Good lawd – you just set fire to my computer monitor!”
*smile* Great image! Thank you.
Ferns
Étienne: “I'm ordinarily not fond of blow jobs, but that sounds exquisite…”
No? That is a little surprising (you are a boy, after all!), but I'm glad this one struck you.
Ferns
TearyFantasies: “Good God woman. I really love erotica from the Domme's point of view…and the pickings are slim. But you, you are amazing!”
Oh, I quoted your entire comment because it was so lovely! Thank you!
Ferns
Ferns,
It's in the subtext, but…
— That is a little surprising (you
— are a boy, after all!)
Marginalizing boys and gaining enjoyment from it. No. That couldn't be you. Clearly, there is an impostor in our midst. :-)
In consideration of the OP text now…
*shifts in his chair to gain a new grasp on this heady piece*
E.
“How long *is* that list now, Brids?”
Are you implying that I'd have a long list of stuff I'd never want to experience? I'll have you know I'm very(barely) adventurous! Everyday I try something new out(ha!).
That blowjob description was OK.
XXXXXXX
— Anonymous wrote:
— That blowjob description was OK.
Dissension in the ranks. Well, alright then. “Boy pile in aisle DC!”
Elan, I've changed my mind. You're a woofter after all.
;-)
Elan: “Marginalizing boys and gaining enjoyment from it. No. That couldn't be you.”
Who me? No no, I would never! Oh wait… yes, yes I would…
Ferns
Brids: “Are you implying that I'd have a long list of stuff I'd never want to experience?”
I was totally implying that, yes… *vigorous nodding*
“I'll have you know I'm very(barely) adventurous! Everyday I try something new out(ha!).”
*laugh*… “very(barely) adventurous”…! I am very glad to hear it Brids, I shall expect a daily report.
Ferns
Elan, Anonymous XXXXXXX:
Now if you two boys are going to have a bitch fight, I want oiled up bodies in cute little boxer briefs, no holds barred, and then after the grunty violence, kissing… at the end… when you make up… natch…
Ferns
I second that Ferns as long as they keep the boxers on AND look cute
Coug
Ferns,
*gets oiled up, everywhere*
I'm in. You already had me at “oiled up bodies” and “cute boxer briefs”, but “kissing to make up” sealed the deal. Natch.
Actually… bring in the “woofter purveyor” ('cause I've got a soft… oops… hard spot for him) and we'll make it a threesome. :-)
E.
Coug: “I second that Ferns as long as they keep the boxers on AND look cute”
Agreed… *writes contract*
Ferns
Elan: “*gets oiled up, everywhere*”
Ooh… nice!
“Actually… bring in the “woofter purveyor”… and we'll make it a threesome.”
Heh… I brought him in already and there is still only two of you… *leaves you to have a little think about that…*
Ferns
Coug,
— I second that Ferns as long as they
— keep the boxers on AND look cute.
Sorry. No can do for the first part. Don't like stray threads in my teeth. Just sayin'.
E.
Ferns,
Apparently I'm not good at reading the “fine print” in contracts. I'd be happy, of course, for you to enlighten me in whatever way seems appropriate. Only two of us… hmmm. Yes, I am confused! Surely the chap of which we speak more than appreciates your fine erotica… er… ah… I mean wordsmithing so who is this “XXXXXXX” fellow?
E.
Elan, you have mail on Collarme. You big girl's blouse, you. ;-)
Mmmmmm Ferns, such wickedly, loveliness!
Hope you don't mind if I borrow the idea. Poor boy only gets it once in a blue moon for extra good behavior and to turn it into an exquisite torture… just too much fun!
Dearest Mr. P,
— Elan, you have mail on Collarme. You
— big girl's blouse, you. ;-)
I caught the “woofter” reference, but missed the clever, yet subtle sarcasm in “that blowjob description was OK”. 'Twould have been an immediate giveaway had I caught it. This is why I thought three people were involved instead of just two. But, what the hey? Are you accusing me of dropping my pants for any boy that comes along? Well, actually, I did, but that's beside the point! Had I known it was you, I'd have joined in the boy-on-boy energy much faster… albeit, this place can't get much hotter given the illustrious capabilities and personality of our graceful host. :-)
Side note to Coug: Sorry if the openness of our repartee is offensive. It's a human-to-human kinda' thing. The boy in question tweaks my mind with his intelligence, charm, personality, and humanity. If I swung that way, I'd happily fuck him, and I just might anyway, should the invitation ever present itself.
E.
Elan you got me baffled what gave you the idea I was offended? I like boys kissing!
Coug
Maggie: “Mmmmmm Ferns, such wickedly, loveliness!”
*nod nod* Thank you!
“Hope you don't mind if I borrow the idea.”
Borrow away!
You know, one of the hottest things for me in this is that he did it to himself… Guh!! The hotness!! I adore that!
*happy sigh*
Ferns
Hi Coug,
— …what gave you the idea I was
— offended? I like boys kissing!
I misunderstood your previous post. This one:
— I second that Ferns as long as they
— keep the boxers on AND look cute.
Oops. Sorry. :-)
E.
Ferns,
— You know, one of the hottest things for
— me in this is that he did it to himself…
— Guh!! The hotness!! I adore that!
— *happy sigh*
We s-types have been known to operate under this modus operandi, yes. The internal logic is: “enduring” is sometimes “getting” because the reactions in your partner are a pleasure in themselves. Also, sometimes the pleasure of a resultant sensation outweighs an unpleasant process it took to get there. Both variants enable reprogramming the psyche to interpret the unpleasant portion in pleasant ways and/or as a turn-on trigger.
Dominants aren't the only ones who do things to create pleasure in their partners and to get pleasing reactions from their partners. When this is at it's best (…and I know you already know this), each partner is finely in tune with what feeds the other's joy and each partner presses the other's joy buttons, when appropriate, frequently. I've always loved this aspect of the BDSM dance. It's a dance that can, from a distance, be mistaken as “dominant doing”, “submissive receiving”, but that in actuality is two, active partners engaging each other and giving to each other. I adore how this is embodied by a kiss. There's just no way to passively kiss someone you love and great kissing is never mono-dimensionally one-sided.
*proofreads and checks spelling… hmmm… seems okay to post* :-)
Elan.
Ferns,
Argh! Darn, darn, darn! Knew I'd miss something. :-) “When this is at it's best…” Whoops. “its”.
Self discipline. It's often the most consuming and heartfelt.
E.
Ferns: You know, one of the hottest things for me in this is that he did it to himself… Guh!! The hotness!! I adore that!
Exactly! It's what actually caught my eye and what I find so intriguing. I'm not a sadist type and giving pain for pains sake just does nothing for me. But recently just have become infatuated by the notion of turning pleasure into pain and or pain into pleasure. This just seems to fall right into the category.
Add to the fun the little twist that a blowjob is something he gets so rarely and saved as a treat for when he goes above and beyond. What a fun little twist for his mind trying to decide if this was for doing something really good, or something really bad! Hehehe
I found this delicious, envigorating, sensuous,sublime,my chastity quivered like a plucked bow string, tremulous and urgent.
Good Work Ferns
subrob
Oh Elan I just don't want to see your dangly parts that's all
– grins –
I Don't need to draw you a picture now do I ?
Coug of the Perfect Arse®
Elan: “The internal logic is: “enduring” is sometimes “getting” because the reactions in your partner are a pleasure in themselves…. [….more perfectly valid thoughts on motivation…]”
*grin* … and sometimes… sometimes… he is just a desperate and beautiful masochist…!
Ferns
Ferns,
— *grin* … and sometimes…
— sometimes… he is just a desperate
— and beautiful masochist…!
This is, in effect, a shorter and more direct version of what I wrote. Ding! Ferns wins the round!
(Executive summaries, as you may well have guessed, are not my strong point. :-)
E.
subrob: “I found this delicious…”
*smile* Thank you for that, subrob.
Ferns
“Hell’s Teeth!” **fans self**
*smile* I’m just catching up on some of your comments back here…
Glad you liked it.
Ferns
Sweet, sweet torture. Why do I want this now?
Because hot. Duh :P.
Ferns